This week in writing we learnt about Hooking our Narratives. I added the green writing to my story to make it better.
Whoosh! The two Volcanoes had their lava pouring out. They were in love and it was in NZ and on April 9 and then they She has to leave. And he is going to follow and then they were in love and when the lava came out and the people there were scared of the lava and they running away and then they were save.
