Friday, 7 April 2017

Penguins writing group

We are learning about when the Rena crash into the reef and  then when it crash into half oil start to go everywhere. And then when the oil went everywhere everybody saw the oil on the rock and on the sea and on the sand and then it was all around the sea when dad want to go surfing mum said you can’t go surfing because there are  oil all around the beach.Then when he didn’t get to go surfing and then when they
Hear that the TV said you can not stay there because there are oil on the sea and on the beach and when the man come to pick oil off the sand and when they are all done you can go back to your homes. And then your dad can go and surf on the beach.

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